These days..
.. fate plays a lot of tricks. It leaves you in a flux. Now is that a good thing or a bad thing? For folks who want clarity, it can ruin their mental make up. For folks who care a damn, it's just a passing incident. And on comes the next.
This cliche about wanting things a little too much and having to wait that much longer or work that much harder to actually get them -- I don't know how much of it is intertwined with fate.
So, if you think too much about things you want a little too much, would you never get them? This is of course, when you have done everything you can and then the rest is left to somebody else's judgement or some other action to happen.
On the other hand, if you stop thinking about things too much, would you automatically be the first one or be among the first ones to get them?
What's the answer? Anyone who can relate to this? What do you think works?
I am sure the opinion will be divided quite equally. Oh what the heck. Might as well watch the ol' ball bounce and wait for it to stop somewhere. It's gotta.
-V
posted by V at 11:04 AM
18 Comments:
Fate is an elegant legacy
Left with no sight to forsee
More you think, more you bleed
Ther’s no guarantee of mercy.
Convincing on death of dearones darely
Excuse for one to give up very easily
Your choice will make it all upside down,
Don’t dare to follow it blindly.
Deal with how than why of things
Be obedient to your ethics
Not success but satisfaction
I know, as boring as civics.
Life is highly cryptic treasure haunt,
Full of equally simple and mysterious tricks
Quite mysterious. I mean, nice poem and all that. But mysterious.
Mysterious! no, curious to a person unknown
I know, he wears a magical voiced crown.
Crown doesn't rhyme with unknown. Score! V - 1, VN - 0
it depends on how we pronounce dear. Did you get the answer for those questions.........or it is still unanswered?
Ha! Crown is pronounced in just 1 manner! http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/crown
The questions shall be answered!
okay grammar, i agree. correct my lines as i could'nt.
Nah, not going to, too lazy after a lot of mind boggling work. Besides, I kinda liked your first poem, so I am gonna leave it at that and spare you. :P
One last dig which I couldn't resist though .. "couldn't" -- notice the apostrophe? It's not after "d", it's after "n".
:P :P
What's with the magical voiced crown anyway? Didn't quite get the context.
oh,i din't notice.
I wanted to tell you that have got magical voice...thats all
Thank you! Appreciate the compliment wholeheartedly!
Our pleasure grammar leisure
We amour to tease her
Flashy and sophisticated witch
Alas, she was very very rich.
-------------using my poor grammar
Looks like someone's taking things wayyyy too seriously :P
And btw, if you really want to talk to me, you can ping me online. We don't have to do this here! :)))))
not mentioned mail-id in your profile.So, how can i?
Welllll.. you seem to be the smart one, you know that I sing, you even stumbled upon my blog, so you should know my name.. you figure it out!
You sing! i dint know that
cannot come online....b'coz i think i am not as spontaneous as you and a lot to mention.I will find out and send you mails. Bye for now
You said I have a "magical" voice, so I figured it was that?
Anyway, upto you!
heard you talking and laughing....
very magical that it resisted me to do
other than to listen to you
-- YYMNsi@gmail.com
er... ok.
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